Frost: review

June 20, 2011 2 star books, myths, Wendy, wendy delsol 3

by Wendy Delsol

It’s a tricky situation when you’re really looking forward to reading a book and it ends up being a disappointment. I normally post my reviews fairly quickly after reading, but I put off writing this one for some time because I was so conflicted over my feelings.

The thing is, I really enjoyed Stork, the first book in this series, for several reasons: the strikingly original paranormal concept of a girl who is destined to be part of a mystical order of women, the fresh and funny voice, the cute relationship between Katla and Jack, and the bits of Icelandic lore. I thought that the paranormal stuff could have been more fleshed out, however, and I was hoping that this second installment would more fully explain what Katla’s duties and powers actually are and we’d get a little more immersed in the mysterious Stork society.

But that’s not the case. The story goes off onto a different adventure, most of which involves how Katla deals with Jack and his new obsession with learning about his power, which made a bizarre appearance towards the end of the previous novel. So all the things I enjoyed about the first book go out the window pretty fast, particularly the Stork ladies (this storyline is half-heartedly revisited, but quickly abandoned) and the relationship between Jack and Kat. There’s now a giant wedge between them in the shape of a Professor Brigid Fonnkona, an icy environmental researcher who is determined to take him to Greenland. Frost is loosely based on Hans Christian Andersen’s The Snow Queen, so those familiar with the tale will have an inkling of how those elements take shape in the modern version.

What would have been impossible to predict, however, are all the subplots that kept piling on in this book. Something weird is going on with Katla’s afi. The kids are doing a musical version of The Snow Queen at school. Kat’s mom is pregnant. Her dad is around, but…extraneous. Her friends are fighting. Hulda is sick. Kat may or may not be seeing ghosts. Dorit has been kicked out of the society and has disappeared.  There are so many new people and new plots to assimilate, and none of the old ones were at all adequately explained. It seems as though most of these problems could have been fixed during the outlining process., so I am very surprised that they were not.

After awhile, I realized that I was never going to get the answers to my questions from the first book and I probably would never get answers to the new ones popping up. Because frankly, I’m not sure that there is an overall plan figured out for these characters, either. While there were occasional moments towards the beginning that recalled what I enjoyed about the first book (Yule Cat, Santa, Pig-Pen), overall reading this book and watching the story line derail was an extremely frustrating process.

I wouldn’t rule out checking out another one of this author’s books sometime down the road because I do like her voice, but it will be with an extremely guarded and wary eye. I was really sad when I closed this book 10 days ago, and I’m still sad that the promise of the series’ premise will apparently never be fulfilled.

Release Date:  October 11, 2011

Rated 2 out of 5 stars

30-Second Synopsis: A disappointing, increasingly convoluted sequel to Stork, filled with ill-explained mythology and frustrating story lines. An advance copy was provided by the publisher for this review.

3 Responses to “Frost: review”

  1. DaydreamerN

    Ahh too bad. I loved stork. I did not think I was going to like it at all because the idea seemed so out there. But the book really stole my heart.
    Well even if this is a let down the cover is at least beautiful.

    Thanks for the honest review!

  2. kaye (paper reader)

    I’ve been putting off reading this (and the first book) to closer to October and I’m a little bummed that they don’t live up to what I thought it’d be. I’m still going to read them both, but I’m glad to have an idea going in.